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Xmas gifts list (Other) by lunar

For him: 1)Wings. So he can be free from the tormment of his thoughts. 2)A key. So he can unlock the cage of his mind. 3)Love. So he will not suffer anymore. For her: 1) A map. So she knows which route she will take next. 2) A tongue. So she can speak what is in her mind. 3) Hope. So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

lunar 4-Feb-03/2:11 PM
i have tried to re-edit it but not posted it coz i dont wanna copy ur version of it but i cant seem to shape the words any better than this! this poem means a lot to me and i dont want to destroy the feelings i had when i wrote it.




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