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Savior Self (Lyric) by OneFingerAnswer

Satan was head angel Now King of Hell You were my savoir Until you fell Gone are the memories Of our days of joy Here is the knowledge Of your nasty ploy Burnt with our pictures My heart beats on my spine After a few days All will be fine I can get over Your evil ways You never will If the greed stays Tourturing others Making your own chains Stealing from others With no profit or gains How can you help me When you can't help yourself? How can you be a savior If you can't even save yourself?

OneFingerAnswer 2-Feb-03/11:01 PM
2. No, a savior saves something. Take away the act of saving and there is no savior.
3. Is that in the 4th stanza?
4. In the context of the poem it's not likely. Besides it's a question. Questions have answeres. You're assuming the answer is "I can't."

I write poems. I put them on a site called poemranker. Is it poemeranker? Nope. You know why? Because it's a fucking poem. Get over yourself or you remain an ass.




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