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Savior Self (Lyric) by OneFingerAnswer

Satan was head angel Now King of Hell You were my savoir Until you fell Gone are the memories Of our days of joy Here is the knowledge Of your nasty ploy Burnt with our pictures My heart beats on my spine After a few days All will be fine I can get over Your evil ways You never will If the greed stays Tourturing others Making your own chains Stealing from others With no profit or gains How can you help me When you can't help yourself? How can you be a savior If you can't even save yourself?

OneFingerAnswer 2-Feb-03/10:24 PM
2. How is he the savior? If I don't accept it I'm not saved. If there's no sving to be done there is no savior.

3. That's not in the 2nd, 3rd, or 4th... that is what you said.

4. Would you want financial advise from a bum? I wouldn't and in the same way I wouldn't want some one with trouble being happy to try and help me be happy.

Okay, I'll use complete senteces. The word is "poem." There is no "e" at the end. Get it now? If you're going to try to be a smartass make sure you get the smart part down first. Otherwise you simply become an ass.




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