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flight (a poem written in high school) (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

Sway back, swallow the wind and fly gentle sylph. tease the hem of a grey-mantled sky and touch the tips of pine-crowned cliffs. show me your secrets in transparent limbs, I'd follow if only I could, to wrench the clay of my feet from this cold and dusty earth.

poetandknowit 2-Feb-03/9:25 PM
Good thing you wrote this in high school. Of course, your writing hasn't changed all that much, eh? Good try!!




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