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One Moment to the Other (v2) (Free verse) by nentwined

one moment to the other goes by way of circumstance; one moment from the other flows in slow inertial dance. one moment to the other, slight, is where we spend our worry -- 'tis but a brief and fancied flight that causes us our hurry. one moment to the other, long, is hardly there in mem'ry: where once a moment boasted strong 'tis now but only temp'ry. one moment and another pass in that which is our consciousness in spans too short or long to grasp... one moment here, one moment less.

nentwined 2-Feb-03/7:52 PM
no, more just cramming in the syllables because I'm not a poet enough to have better words. Though I like 'tis.




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