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One Moment to the Other (v2) (Free verse) by nentwined

one moment to the other goes by way of circumstance; one moment from the other flows in slow inertial dance. one moment to the other, slight, is where we spend our worry -- 'tis but a brief and fancied flight that causes us our hurry. one moment to the other, long, is hardly there in mem'ry: where once a moment boasted strong 'tis now but only temp'ry. one moment and another pass in that which is our consciousness in spans too short or long to grasp... one moment here, one moment less.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 2-Feb-03/7:10 PM
Yes, of course it does, you cock. What the fuck do you think poemes are? They're either rhyming verse or pieces of prose with linebreaks that having confusing parts in so when people read it they don't understand it and think it must therefore be about something "higher" than humans that we weren't supposed to understand, i.e. "beauty".

YOU'VE BEEN TO THE UNIVERSITY OF LIFE AND THEY DIDN'T EVEN FUCKING TEACH YOU THAT? WHEN SOMEONE HOLDS A GUN TO YOUR HEAD YOU'LL LOSE YOUR PRETENTIONS PRETTY FUCKING FAST MISTER. PIE AND A PARIS BUN.




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