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I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' (Other) by JakeBike

A 'pimple poem' is essentially an ode, written as an expression of teenage angst. It is often rhymed--forcedly so--and can be found scrawled in high school notebooks and on live journals across the net. Often, it lacks even a hint at rhythm, and its structure is rarely overly complicated. By definition, a pimple poem must contain simple, emotionally/romantically evocative words like 'love' and 'hurt' and 'ache' and 'night' and 'stars.' Often laced with odd manipulations of language (L3Et-5pe4k: 'ur' 'luv' 'l8r' 'ne') and fraught with common profanity, it offers a copious use of obvious rhymes (above/love, eyes/lies, heart/apart) and little in the way of metaphor. It is written by the budding poet, for the budding poet, and is a crucial step in one's development as a writer of rhymed poetry: it teaches one what to avoid when composing metrical verse. (see thepinkbunnyofdoom, katie, blade, Teen14, loneshadow29, Jay J.C., JoyfulySlotterdKitty, amalea, little_angel_maria, etc. for classic symptoms.)

poetandknowit 2-Feb-03/10:25 AM
Blade is just a mindless brit popper. He is trying to be stupid so remove him. But add Range and put Cadacus back on there!!!!! And DA for his abundance of ass pimples!!! And God's Wife for that Raven poem!!




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