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Slow motion (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I drove by a cozy chateau The lights glowed occupants roamed While outside the world turned as it snowed.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Feb-03/7:28 PM
Makes a good poening to a story but not much of a poem by itself. It needs more. I'll vote when you add to it.




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