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Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Mercury vapor Engine of the future past Philosopher Stone Caduceus secrets Antediluvian world Under water math Neptune's ten sons A colonizing people Farewell Atlantis.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 31-Jan-03/9:40 PM
No, Horus8 is my real name, and Jeremi is just something i hold onto to pass the time? Darkest recesses of poemranker? that's funny... Do you mean Babbit's unexplored posterior cavity, or Settle's odiferous inner ear infection. By the way Nick, the only thing bathos about these haiku is that they're not. Come now, let's not insult one another's intelligence. I thought we were beyond our Sophmore years, and experimenting with real lab beakers and bunson burners now? I'd prefer if you'd not bore me with your epic similes and rhetorical figures in the name of tradition Nick. I am starting to get the impression that your consistant Jacobean age yammering was not a phase, but a pacifier. What? Am i not aloud a little light verse once in a while? You pian my sole Nick, you really do. CARPE DIEM DOGS!




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