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The darkest woods ever (Sonnet) by Shardik

They were the darkest woods ever At least that I had ever seen Trees with leaves almost of leather Animals, that struck me as too lean. So I quickened up my rigid stride While my eyes scanned for some light If I had a horse, full speed I'd ride If my lungs were not so tight. I never should have dared to trespass God damn shortcuts are always wrong Where is my boyscout with his compass? Why is this taking so awfully long!? Wait... Is that a light I see up ahead? No... Just the moon climbing higher instead.

Shardik 31-Jan-03/1:52 PM
I would, but unfortunately i never went to school, and when i was there... English was definitely my worst subject. So, that said... let's blame the inorganic being i wrestled with in the new mexican desert on 20 buttons of peyote, and my relentless interest behind who really pushes the smoke button in the city of Oz. Shall we? Great... here's how i break free. enjoy your Sexton.

http://gangbox.com/mp3/dear%20mrs%20sexton.mp3




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