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The Sadistic Mirth (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

The breath of air I breathe Is drawn in a sharp gasp And then to exhale is a long Piercing shriek That I alone can hear My life exists in agony My existance in suffering And I suffer in desolation I refuse to move Refuse to allow myself to heal It is my hand that causes the pain I am the murderer I bring Pain to the innocent My death would be welcome To those that have reason to hate It is my time to seek a Vengeance so unjust that I Am marked as an evil force I am the beast unleashed Know my pain

razorgrin 31-Jan-03/9:39 AM
The redeeming part was the "know my pian" bit. Funniest twist ever. All this time I was reading what looked like a Serious and Heartfelt Poeme, but pian was a great satirical twist. Of course if it really is just a typo, that makes you an illiterate fucktard.




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