Replying to a comment on:

Love (Other) by NinjaPoet

We were lying in bed, me and my girl, and the telephone rang. We let the machine pick up: Mr. Johnson, this is Captain Video, again. You have a late fee on, umm, 'The Butt Sisters Do Sturgis.' Please bring the movie back. Thank you. Weneverlaughedsohard.

poetandknowit 29-Jan-03/10:52 PM
The title of the film should be in quotations not apostrophes. That is unless you put quotations around what the character on the answering machine is saying, which would be proper and justify what your are doing at that point. Is "Weneverlaughedsohard" (note proper use) a word. I looked it up and it was not in the dictionary.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001