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Mom And Dad (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

My mother is a hippocrite My father is full of shit My life is so fucked up Who cares its fucked up? Well everything that i've ever done was never good enough for any one Well now i'm having my revenge I'm going to burn you and your shit town Its all coming down The flames are shooting up and burning down Everything that you once tried to build Your world is falling apart And now you know how it feels My parents are killing me For the way that i am My world is falling apart And there is is nothing that i can do Well i'm gonna rip out your guts and throw'em against the wall Now you'll know my pain And i won't have to explain The hurt inside of my head Cause you'll all be dead And i'll be left all alone My mom and dad are destroying me And there is nothing that i can do Well i'm gonna fight back I'm gonna be heard You'll all know my name I'm gonna murder and massacure and burn your ass Teach you the meaning of pain You'll all know my name And my suffering

razorgrin 28-Jan-03/11:14 AM
"Like, ohmygawd, my parents are SOOO unfair!! They won't let me out to do crystal meth on a school night and they even say I wear too much makeup! Ohmygawd, I'm like so totally pissed. I'm going to make really half-assed inarticulate poemes about how I want to kill them!" Kiddo, you write like a nu-metal Charlie Manson. Except I doubt you could get any followers. Tell you what. I'll take you out on a nice Hot Topic shopping spree and then drive you up to the mall where you can scare the preppie normals. Cheer up, Buttercup! What exactly is a 'massacure'? A really bad manicure? Oh, yeah, I know. It's the result of a Grade 8 American public school education. Here, a zero of spoooky ragin' teenage angst.




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