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Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Mercury vapor Engine of the future past Philosopher Stone Caduceus secrets Antediluvian world Under water math Neptune's ten sons A colonizing people Farewell Atlantis.

Nicholas Jones 28-Jan-03/4:53 AM
Jeremi (if that is your real name) are you Horus8 gone undercover, deep into the darkest recesses of poemranker where his reputation will not preceed him. By the way, this neatly deconstructs the traditional haiku.




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