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Afterglow (Free verse) by Imperfections

Long after the burn in my eyes from the words that you said and the burn in my thighs from the night in your bed fades away, your voice still plays like a song in my head through the day.

Bill Z Bub 24-Jan-03/3:05 PM
a burning sensation in the thigh region? You should see a doctor.
seriously though, not bad
so far.




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