poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on 9/11 tribute by Caducus.

Caducus24 Jan 2003

To ranger / tintagiles. Thanks for commenting on this. I cannot think how to modify the beard thing. Basically i read that a cirrus cloud is shaped like a beard and found the connection with osama, cirrus clouds also travel from east to west so the metaphor seemed relevent but i think i could use it a better way. I know your work well tintagiles, you work well with imagery please pass on any thoughts. Also if i get rid of the angels bit i may lose the poem. I will work on this over weekend.