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Listen For Once (Free verse) by Sarahmarie

So she likes me more than her. That's what you tell me. It's kinda funny. All moms like me better. So why am I still alone? I have so many ex-boyfriends as enemies. I have so many ex-moms as friends. They all tell me, "She doesn't deserve him." "You are so much better than she is" So why am I still alone? It makes no sense. Your mom knows what's best for you. So why don't you listen?

god'swife 21-Jan-03/3:04 PM
Jesus Christ girl, slooow down, infact STOP, take a look. The mothers love you because you're just like them. The boys are tired of their moms, be some other thing. What the fuck do you care anyway? You carry the seed. Anyway your poem is bland and of low-intellect.




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