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late night activities (Limerick) by sooz

there once was a boy named jack, who was totally a guru in the sack, his girlfriend would come over and give him the eye, and a short bit later scream out quite a sigh, "no wonder all the ladies want to keep coming back"

Robert K Foster 17-Jan-03/11:31 AM
again, line lengths disrupt what the rhythm should be.




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