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not even soup (Haiku) by <~>

well past dinner time, dippers spill to a full moon-- hunger carves my thoughts

Nicholas Jones 16-Jan-03/6:57 AM
Very nice indeed, especially the last line; physical bodily processes have their effect on psychology - President Nasser nationalised the Suez Canal because he had toothache, or something. I like soup, especially tomato, but I a bagel for lunch today, which I filled with brie and put in a hot oven for fifteen minutes, and ate with cranberry sauce.




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