Replying to a comment on:

Anchored pockets (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I have become wealthy thusly becoming lazy looking to my future I view it quite hazy. The butterfly passes and I cannot disprove the butterfly dances it cannot make me move.

INTRANSIT 15-Jan-03/7:00 AM
Thank you. I've realised that fewer poems with more effort is a worthwhile endeavor. This piece however seems to have flopped.
win some lose some. Could I get some thoughts on "eskimo", please.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001