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flight (a poem written in high school) (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

Sway back, swallow the wind and fly gentle sylph. tease the hem of a grey-mantled sky and touch the tips of pine-crowned cliffs. show me your secrets in transparent limbs, I'd follow if only I could, to wrench the clay of my feet from this cold and dusty earth.

Caducus 15-Jan-03/1:54 AM
I'm cracking up i read your poem and thought exactly what gods wife said, so did you? you smoothie you. By the way this is quite beautiful it enchanted me, you have many sides to your die and most are sixes -9-




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