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alienheart (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

i look up with pinwheel eye and magnify: zeta reticuli! everything is turning grey; gelatinous sky & rooves of snow. my love is strange today, with almond eye, obsidian glow. watching lights change from red to go. my alien heart rising, a halcyon UFO. ii you are majestic true majic, let me abduct you to my freaky laboratory. i need a sample for my planet but thats just part of the story. ancient astronauts have claimed such territory but I'm faking footprints on the pyramids of mars. lets secretly strip have some fun, i want to touch your area 51. you can be my agent Scully I'll be a lone nut with a gun. when you're done with me I'll need an autopsy. making circles in the crops with bodies of bendy. time seems elastic, the missing hours swing away. what switch in our alien hearts makes us part? we're in balance we twins of the zodiac. looking for rest or a phone to call home.

Ranger 15-Jan-03/1:05 AM
This poem seriously rocks, however I'm not 100 per cent sure that the TV references etc do work-even so, I can't really see anything else working so all I can say is "nice one!". 9




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