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Anchored pockets (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I have become wealthy thusly becoming lazy looking to my future I view it quite hazy. The butterfly passes and I cannot disprove the butterfly dances it cannot make me move.

poetandknowit 14-Jan-03/11:18 PM
Another adverbial clause. They are everywhere. You know, Intransit, I am proud of you. You are up to 13 poems now and have yet to pull them all off.




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