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Fire And Fuck (Free verse) by Bonehiss

Slamming whores Behind slamming doors, Get you limp to hard With a hammering heart. Your brain goes numb As your fingers run, Through wild skank hair. Rush! Rush! Time is short. Don't bother to sterilize. Just pack your rig. Rush again! Then finally, Spun-out, Pick at your toenails, As you watch Your once impressive Partying skills, Turn slowly, Into sad addiction.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Jan-03/4:11 PM
TOP SECRET SUGGESTION: Please do not use the word 'tripe' except when referring to literal tripe. It is the most awful and overused word ever. It makes the wielder sound like they are a middle aged schoolmistress or a fifteen-year-old. My condolences if you are one of those things.




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