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Retreived (Lyric) by T'ien

Redemption's flowing cry calls me by and by fond memory hidden timless from every eyes caress stolen minds of pleasures fool i give myself and become your tool I forget why i lost you until i find you your followed sheep am I forever watching always knowing of your bitter sweet hidden virtue

poemwanker 14-Jan-03/6:42 AM
Oh you are funny babayaga aren't you? This is better than a lot of songs that get popular and make loads of money-obviously you missed the 'lyric' bit at the start, you observant person, you.
T'ien this is good, I liked it v. much well done.
However, I don't get the second to last line-'Your followed sheep'-is it a typo? Please explain.




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