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not even soup (Haiku) by <~>

well past dinner time, dippers spill to a full moon-- hunger carves my thoughts

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Jan-03/11:41 PM
What's so obscure about it? A PERSON IS VERY HUNGRY. THEY COMPARE THE BIG AND LITTLE DIPPERS TO SOUP LADLES. BUT IN FACT THEY ARE NOT SOUP LADES. THEY ONLY MADE THIS COMPARISON BECAUSE THEY HAD MISSED DINNER. hurrr I understand good




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