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P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist (Other) by smlink84

Misery and shame Are his blame He suffered, For my name. The flower of spring Bloomed in winter, Light of the world Conviction like splinters. How do I thank you, How shall I praise you, From my daily bread I turn to you.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Jan-03/8:05 AM
Great use of "blame" and "name" to rhyme with "shame"!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! I'M SURE YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE IN NO TIME!!!!11




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