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Curse fait (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

The chill still runs through my body When I think about what was there God I had loved and what of it if I still do? Man I still want you I still long for the safety of your embrace I want to know the voice I hear is yours I want to sleep next to you in your bed I want to see your face when I first wake To look into your eyes To know that we belong with each other I still can't help but to see you as perfect It causes me pain to know that I can't be yours I don't know you as I used to I still want you that bad Why can't I just have you Though I know it would be better off If I were to accept you as my friend I know that you don't want to change that. It's time that I move on and yet my feet are weary I want to forget what I felt Just to move away from the pain of knowing That we can't love each other in the same way

Freethinker1602 10-Jan-03/12:13 PM
Look here dingbat.....I think I have talent. Yet you gave me a two. Will you enjoy it when I jest at your longing? Ney I shall not sink to the level of a lowely and talentless baffoon. Therefore I shall rate your work accordingly. Pride is every one's down fall eventually. Be ware of your own words for some day they may anger some one.




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