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The dance (Free verse) by purplestain

Did you have any idea, How happy I was when you asked for a dance? My spirits were soaring, And it only took your two strong arms to bring me back, Your warm embrace melted my cold icy guard, The world just passed me by, As I look into your eyes, And you drew me closer, The moment was just like a dream, A dance I will never forget.

purplestain 9-Jan-03/8:05 PM
thank you for your word of advice. i will definitely take it into account in my next attempt at writing.
but why would you not want me to read any more of your poems?




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