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infector (Free verse) by zotsf

playing at the playground rife with virus running on the equipment a scream in the lung rolling on the sofa soft as mama soiling a daiper leaking the infector

anonymous 21-Jun-01/11:38 PM
That's kinda disturbing. Makes me think of The Stand, or something like. I like more flow in the poetry I read, but this has a good impact regardless. It would do well as a Funker Vogt song. ;) Actually, it's better than their lyrics...




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