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my life (Free verse) by sir_heff

I die every night My life is a fight The hatred inside just eats me alive hatred of my self and what i cannot find happiness i searched for thats not in my mind it's in front of my eyes but i can not see its out there, in the air but i can not breathe

sir_heff 9-Jan-03/10:46 AM
thank you. i've gotten that responce from a lot of people i've showed it to. it only took me like 10 min. to wright this, but i reread it about a thousand times, then called like half my friends and read it to them, i was quite pleased with it :)




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