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Mannequin (draft) (Free verse) by Ranger

Perfect human sculpture Vanity idolised As you pose, waiting For the imminent portrait I will draw, Joints and all I can control your curves, Your polished pine highlights Yet those subtle postures Of yours, I cannot master My picture An exact replica Image of a flawed perfection And I see it and weep As anger grows I shake you Throw you Hit you Your neck twists Limbs at broken angles And with a crack You snap back to life Then you smile at me Though you have no mouth And I pick up my pencil And draw You have won

Ranger 9-Jan-03/2:42 AM
Thank you, and yes, it is very irritating that people will continue to display idiocy when faced with some unknown person appearing in the top, but still, that's life.
Oh well, I can do naught but write.




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