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Nightwalker (Free verse) by Another Bobjim?!?!

He stalks, Flitting, From shadow To shadow, Silently, Moving, Sliding gently Behind her, His victim, Soon, She will know His touch, Cold, And rough, Like the pools Of his eyes, Hard, Until, The final Act, Death.

lunar 7-Jan-03/1:43 PM
I think you should make a new poem with everyones suggestions it would be a lot funner! (7 for freaking me out tho-i have to go wiv u to college-AHH!)




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