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Birth (Haiku) by nentwined

warm evelopement nurturing bath, burning love ends with explosion

anonymous 19-Jun-01/1:31 AM
I always expect the last line of a haiku to have a disjointed feeling from the first two lines. Trying to follow the poet's leap is part of the attraction of the form. This seems too close.




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