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Circle
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Free verse
) by
Christof
The finger upon the piano key Topples a note like a domino Into eternity Beyond the limits of the sensory Ringing through the ear's soft-yielding bowl Into memory So let the rings upon our fingers be The first notes of our eternal vow That's the key
-=SeTTle=-
4-Jan-03/10:32 PM
A little jokey at the end don't you think? Otherwise quite good. There's a lot you can do with pianos.
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