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I Retry My Resolve (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones

I retried my resolve By the broken down train - And I could only Shout to the tracks That I am reviled And myself Is divided to the roots. I retried my resolve In streets that are not mine I retried my resolve And found it sabotaged. Therefore I shall distrusted And myself Divided to the dogs. I retry my resolve And find I have none, The routes shall not Be used again And I am divded against all else.

Nicholas Jones 4-Jan-03/4:39 PM
Should be I shall be distrusted. It's a shapshot, a moment in time. Why should there be a message or a story? It can just be a feeling.




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