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The dance (Free verse) by purplestain

Did you have any idea, How happy I was when you asked for a dance? My spirits were soaring, And it only took your two strong arms to bring me back, Your warm embrace melted my cold icy guard, The world just passed me by, As I look into your eyes, And you drew me closer, The moment was just like a dream, A dance I will never forget.

purplestain 4-Jan-03/2:24 AM
wow, this is by far the most overwhelming response i've ever received for posting a poem. i actually got a rating of 10! that really caught me by surprise. thank you for all your comments, i appreciate it. and by the way, i don't think i know anyone of you here as i'm from malaysia, and if you're wondering where is that, it's somewhere in south east asia




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