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I Retry My Resolve (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones

I retried my resolve By the broken down train - And I could only Shout to the tracks That I am reviled And myself Is divided to the roots. I retried my resolve In streets that are not mine I retried my resolve And found it sabotaged. Therefore I shall distrusted And myself Divided to the dogs. I retry my resolve And find I have none, The routes shall not Be used again And I am divded against all else.

Nicholas Jones 3-Jan-03/4:29 PM
I like the repetition, but I can see it might be a bit much. I think there's a lot that needs changing.....it's something I wrote years ago that came into my head today, and this is all I remember.




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