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I Retry My Resolve (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones

I retried my resolve By the broken down train - And I could only Shout to the tracks That I am reviled And myself Is divided to the roots. I retried my resolve In streets that are not mine I retried my resolve And found it sabotaged. Therefore I shall distrusted And myself Divided to the dogs. I retry my resolve And find I have none, The routes shall not Be used again And I am divded against all else.

INTRANSIT 3-Jan-03/3:53 PM
Is there a way to lose (1) "resolve line. preferably S-2 L-3. Other than that I wouldn't touch it.




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