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Caged (Free verse) by TxMstng02

Pounding against the cage Like a beast inside Breaking free Living to die Memories of afar Where they will never go Here to stay Forever alone Living to serve But only one master Love and hate show no mercy Waiting for the time after Sores of pain Bleed from inside A tiny prayer is said Wishing to die Escape from cruelty On the inside Cracks of pain Cry out with no shame The torture has no end One after the other They come to die In front of millions Who dare to cry One tear is shed Nothing ends Alone here forever Until the time is end Pounding against the cage Yet nothing is inside Only memories Of past Which will only hide Covered up from all that wishes to see The torture Until set free

Caducus 3-Jan-03/9:12 AM
Like the subject, quite like the poem but how impressed I would be to read it completely from the animals perspective, now that would earn maximum points, I might have a go at it - see I'm inspired !

(Went to see the chimps once as a kid and they chuked their shit at everyone gawping at them, THATS POETIC JUSTICE ) good day sir heres a 6




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