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Caged (Free verse) by TxMstng02

Pounding against the cage Like a beast inside Breaking free Living to die Memories of afar Where they will never go Here to stay Forever alone Living to serve But only one master Love and hate show no mercy Waiting for the time after Sores of pain Bleed from inside A tiny prayer is said Wishing to die Escape from cruelty On the inside Cracks of pain Cry out with no shame The torture has no end One after the other They come to die In front of millions Who dare to cry One tear is shed Nothing ends Alone here forever Until the time is end Pounding against the cage Yet nothing is inside Only memories Of past Which will only hide Covered up from all that wishes to see The torture Until set free

<{Baba^Yaga}> 3-Jan-03/3:43 AM
once at the zoo last year the orangutan covered himself with a blanket, and wouldn't let no one see him, all day every day for like a month..it was funny stuff i tell you..quiet and eerie, than they brought in a specialist who said he needed a mate, now they are both under the blanket. wating for everyone to go home...true, but back to poetry.this is a...struggling peace, salmon like to swim upstream to feel the resistance, and earn the pussy...but if you turn one down stream he'll just find a pool to die in..also true. so GET OUT OF THE PULL, AND SWIM SWIM! that was a metaphor aimed at helping you write better poetry, do not try to do a jack ass stunt, and pool hop nude with a salmon tied to your guppie.that would be mobile poetry, and possibly land you in jail. e




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