poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Advent Of Monsoon by anitawit.

<~>2 Jan 2003

how about 'pry' (to try to force) or 'ply' (to work at repeatedly) silently at ...then it would seem like the creature was trying to get in.

also, 'yellow' sunshine sounds cheery--if dismal is where you are going with this, may i suggest 'yellowed' instead? it feels used, up, aged, nasty.