<~>2 Jan 2003

i have made this edit for you to show you what i meant--the text needs to be centered as you had it, but won't translate in the comment box.

Also, you have several verb tenses working against each other--i suggest making it less passive, more active so the poem shows that you are in some way contributing to the path towards the center.

i hope these comments were useful to you, and hope i have not overstepped.