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Kernel (Free verse) by anitawit

I pass through many sieves in my many lives The lesser I grow in size The stronger I become Approaching closer To the Kernel

anitawit 2-Jan-03/8:57 PM
Should I work on the last three lines at the expense of the shape...?




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