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Kernel (Free verse) by anitawit

I pass through many sieves in my many lives The lesser I grow in size The stronger I become Approaching closer To the Kernel

<~> 2-Jan-03/11:37 AM
can you refine those last 3 lines--make them a little denser, more toward the kernel, if you will?

good idea.




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