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Hunt (Free verse) by cobalt

Greener than the leaves irridescent heads glint against a dun river's shimmery lap, lulled Instantly uncradled, slivers of blue flash from unfurling wings burst heavenward as shot shatters silence in the reeds He sits silent, blinded awaits the fall

Freethinker1602 1-Jan-03/11:58 PM
I know you can do better than that. After all the pleasure of the capture and kill comes entirely from the hunt. Have pride in seeking the hated. Take joy in how you reach your victory




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