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Turn your back (Free verse) by kliq

Who are you? Standing in the dark I don't see you Come into the light Why do you reject the light? What did they do? The creatures of the night Do they belong to you? I don't blame you! That's all we really are Till someone finds us Till someone cracks us We are always in the dark To them. I don't know you! And I won't see you Until the day I crack that soul All you'll be is a stranger in the night So I'll turn my back And walk away And I'll come back When I know you, when I have light to shine On your dark exterior Then I'll find you Then I'll know you Then you wont be in dark!

rockinindividual 1-Jan-03/1:16 PM
its rhythm is somewhat messed up...makes reading it kind of jerky...4




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