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Februarys mother (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

The Sun flower reaches for us as we lay between the evergreen trees on a silken bed of autumn leaves. Our bodies intertwine the Indian wind as it blows tender over us. I tickle the water as I swim upstream the salmon river. All the while knowing we will never awaken until September.

powerline 31-Dec-02/7:14 PM
Nice. Caught all the images solid. There is so much to be said about letting a verse hang out there, letting others take from it what they may.

In this case, what the words meant to you also carried with me.





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