Nicholas Monson31 Dec 2002
I am glad it achieved a stirring effect. When read aloud (slowly) it works even better. Its debut led the congregation at the wedding of my muse and I to roar though I hope this wasn't with relief that the poem had ended. See a comment below about whom from another contributor. It may not work well to your ear but it is correct grammar. Please experiment with a grammatical alternative and post it if you find one.