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The Eskimo and the fish (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

From the safety of a smoky dome He drags his life through the whiteness of time. To auger breifly into another world and sit fishing with intense interest. Peering into the water he chants: Ocean waters deep and cold what is said is what is told. I love my life from wife to land seems but paltry within my hand. The Inuit retrieves a spotted char Then slowly traces its teeth marked flesh He chants again: Small of fish bruised and burled I wish you well in your hasty world I asked the oceans deep and cold your harried life is what they showed. Then relinquishes it to its home. Again the empty line descends and quickly lands a heartier meal. The man bundles his tools and smiles at his catch and hurriedly returns to his family who expect nothing more.

INTRANSIT 30-Dec-02/6:39 PM
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